Old McDie ate a fly
and soon got very sick.
From pesel whips and monkey chips.
And died from it.
Too soon to die !
by ERIN BARNES 6 January 2008
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Hi Erin! I LOVE your blog, it is lovely!! I also have a blog but it has been so long since I last wrote anything that I am not sure how to get back into writing all the time! I have a son named James who is 11 and he also loves writing, just like you.
I love this poem Old McDie! It reminds me of a poem I wrote many years ago when I was 8 years old. It is in the time capsule at the primary school I went to and it will be re-opened in 28 years!!
It is called “THE SCARY KNIGHT”
Once there was a knight
Who had a scary fight
He stabbed a horse
With tomato sauce
And then he died of fright!
Well done on your blog Erin, keep up the good work!
Love Mish
xoxox
By: Michelle on January 6, 2008
at 10:21 am